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Monday, April 30, 2007

Who's Holding Your Trampoline?

Mike’s stories have appeared in Relief Journal, Forgotten Worlds, Alienskin, and Dragons, Knights and Angels, with articles in The Matthew’s House Project and Relevant Magazine. He was also one of ten authors picked for Infuze Magazine’s Best of 2005 print anthology. Mike is an ordained minister, has led numerous small groups and developed discipleship-training curriculum for several churches. He and his wife Lisa live in Southern California , where they have raised four children. Mike has written an unpublished novel entitled What Faith Awakes and is currently at work on a second. You can visit him at www.mikeduran.com.




By Mike Duran

It is not a coincidence that some of the greatest words ever written were chiseled. While on a mountaintop. Alone. Of course, Moses had some assistance. But if he’d stayed at home with the missus and the incessant bleating of his tribesmen, it’s doubtful that the Ten Commandments would have ever been penned.

For most writers, our best work is done away from others. We bring our laptop to the mountaintop, for it’s there that, on occasion, the heavens open. Seldom do the muses compete with the TV or iPod. “Writing is a solitary occupation,” said Jessamyn West. “Family, friends, and society are the natural enemies of the writer. He must be alone, uninterrupted, and slightly savage if he is to sustain and complete an undertaking.” Of course, convincing our "friends" and "family" that they are our "natural enemy" could get a bit sticky.

But while we create in isolation, we advance in community. Good writing communicates, which is the least solitary of endeavors. To communicate is to commune, to interact with other intellects. Likewise, a writer has not really succeeded until she has readers, someone who will “commune” with her material. Without the eyes and ears of others, our work is incomplete.


These two sides of writing—the “alone-ness” and the “together-ness”—are equally important, and I think, becoming a good writer means cultivating both halves. Even Lewis and Tolkien, now luminaries in the literary pantheon, yoked themselves to the Inklings. Who's to say what Narnia would have looked like had not the maker of Middle Earth cast a keen eye on the beloved tale. Could Aslan have acquired some genteel feature from someone other than Clive? Yes, we need a quiet place to develop our skills and sift ideas, but we also need Inklings, people who will read what we have written, encourage, correct, affirm, and ultimately propel us back to our quarters with renewed vision and vigor.

Donald Joy is Professor of Human Development at Asbury Theological Seminary. He's written numerous books on human relationships. The first chapter of his book Bonding is entitled, "Who is Holding Your Trampoline?" The basic concept is this: If you were trapped on the third floor of a burning building and only your closest companions—your most intimate, authentic relationships—could gather below to catch you, who would be there with the safety net? How many proven, reliable, unflinchingly honest friends do you have? Who's holding your trampoline? Joy suggests that the “healthy” individual should have at least twenty such people in this healing, supportive circle.

I wonder that writers have a unique need for “trampoline holders”—a band of people who will understand our quirks and passions, read our material and bring insight, get our creative juices flowing, lift us during times of depression and deflate us when our pride swells. And, maybe most of all, simply pray for us.

The day after I arrived home from Texas, still buzzing from last year's ACFW conference, I received a call from a very good friend whom I shall call V. Her story is a heartbreaking one, filled with tragedy and loss. But for the last 18 years, V has been "called" to intercede for me. I didn't solicit her prayers or swing a deal, make pacts or promises. Yet God prompted something in her, which I greatly covet. V is one of my intercessors; she has followed the arc of my spiritual life and graced me with her prayers. Her phone call was more than coincidence.

At the aforementioned conference, I attended Mary DeMuth’s terrific workshop entitled Inside Out Fiction. In it, Mary mentioned the need for intercessors in a writer's life. She currently has 48 people committed to praying for her writing ministry and encourages Christian authors to nurture their own intercessory circle. I have to admit, until then I hadn’t spent much time recruiting trampoline holders. In fact, I found myself wrestling with the rationale.

It seems odd that a "storyteller" needs so much prayer support, doesn’t it? I mean, fiction is make-believe; the spinning of yarns is anything but seriously spiritual, right? Now if I was writing about theology, apologetics or the mafia, I would need prayer. But the author of fiction hardly seems in need of such formidable backing. Sadly, many see the novelist as nothing more than a glorified jester, employed only for diversion, laughs or philosophical musing. No wonder the concept of prayer warrior seems incongruous with fiction writer.

The Bible does not maintain such distinctions. In fact, some of the most powerful stories in Scripture are fictional. The Good Samaritan. The Rich Man and Lazarus. The Parable of the Lost Sheep, the Unmerciful Servant and the Wedding Banquet. Jesus was a storyteller, and His tales were both entertaining and hauntingly relevant. He affirmed the unique power of story, the force of simple narrative, and the uncanny ability of common characters to wheedle themselves into our psyche, to spirit us away or stop us in our tracks. Maybe the fiction writer wields more possibility than, at first glance, we afford her.

As such, the most vital tool of the Christian novelist may not be the dictionary, thesaurus, or plot planner, but the intercessor. This is not to suggest we should neglect craft in favor of prayer, but that we balance both. No warrior is beyond needing a good blacksmith. In like manner, the stories that cut the deepest are often those that have whetted longest on the grindstone of prayer. Perhaps the writing life with its peculiar need for isolation, its roller coaster of emotion, its intangible spiritual drain, demands much more than just good grammar and a novel idea. As much as we want readers, we may need pray-ers and, just maybe, we can't have one without the other.

So the next time you find yourself stuck in rewrites or barraged by self-doubt, creatively dry or administratively overwhelmed, frozen at a career crossroad or meandering toward a dead end; when you’re sitting on the mountaintop waiting for lightning to strike or standing on the ledge of a burning building preparing to jump, I’ve got one question: Who's holding your trampoline?

Sunday, April 29, 2007

Sunday Devotion: Bull-headed? Me?

Cindy Sproles

We’ve always remained true to discipline in our family. With four boys all fifteen months apart, we had no other option. The odds were against us from the beginning. Since we were a combined family we had to be especially careful to maintain the same standards for all four kids. Therefore, we opted to use the counting method.

You know, “I’m going to count to three and if you haven’t done what I asked you’re going to…” Well, we modified the theory a bit, but before we refined the process my husband and I came to a mutual agreement. Regardless, we would stick to the plan. Discipline was as much an issue for us as it was the kids because we had to remain true to the agreement.

We agreed that three was the magic number. We’d count to one and explain the issue. Count two – the ball was in the boys’ court. They would be the deciding factor in whether they would obey or be punished. Count three – we executed the punishment, no exceptions.

We realized early on (since both of us owned a strong-willed son) that we couldn’t deviate. The hardest part of discipline for a parent is follow-through. Strangely enough, it only took a couple of incidents before our kids understood that mom and dad should never reach the third count because they would carry through. We rarely had to spank our boys because early on, they figured out we were parents of our word.

1 Samuel 15:23 guides us by saying, “For rebellion is like the sin of divination, and arrogance like the evil of idolatry. Because you have rejected the word of the Lord, he has rejected you as king.” Of course, this scripture refers to King David but the point is the same. God maintained a sense of discipline with His people. He forewarned them, and then He counted to three only to execute the discipline if His children refused to listen.

Obedience has always been a problem for the human race. Like small children we continue to test the waters God has told us to stay away from. Very few truly comply – even down to us. We know lying is wrong, still we lie. We know gossip is wrong, still we continue to gossip. When disobedient children continue to misbehave, then they must be disciplined.

As writers we sometimes have difficulty sticking to the task; for that fact, listening when God calls us to write. Our desire is to write the burning story on our mind but it may be that the Father wants us to write the burning story He places on our hearts. When we fail to follow His instruction, He gently disciplines us. Learning to lay aside our own will and bow to that of the One who has the plan takes a little practice. Thank goodness we have a loving God who understands us and knows our hearts.

We think discipline is only for our children, when in fact, it applies to all of us. Just as God continues to impress upon us the right way to do things, He also rewards us for the good that we do. And believe me; the rewards far out weigh the punishments.
One afternoon, we met head on with one of our strong-willed boys. “Son, don’t be so bull-headed about things.” His response was simple.

“Bull-headed – Me?” A grin parted his lips as he turned to perform the task he was asked to do. Unfortunately, we all harbor a little bull-headedness and God still has to discipline even His adults.

Would you like to know something funny? All four of our sons are fine adult men now. They all tower over the top of me in height. But you let me point my finger and say, “One!” They generally lean back and roar in laughter – but not until they’ve done what was asked of them.

Prayer: Precious Lord, discipline hurts but I am grateful You love me enough to follow-through.

DISCLAIMER: For the record, we were never mean to our boys. I know someone out there will think we were, but it’s simply not true. Our discipline was always fair, provided privately for each son, and followed up with great love and compassion. We never once pinched off a head! As they say down south, “Facts is facts!”


Friday, April 27, 2007

Some Happenings in the book world . . .

Novel Journey is pleased to announce that fellow-blogger Mark Bertrand has picked up his first book contract—(Re)Thinking Worldview Learning to Think, Live, and Speak in This World. This book will be particularly appealing to those interested in writing from a Christian Worldview. Keep tract of the progress of the book (and read some awesome endorsements) at: http://www.jmarkbertrand.com/worldview/

I'm reprinting the e-blast sent out by Library Journal with permission. I hope our readers will choose to take part. As someone who worked as a publicist and now as a book clerk, Book Critics and Book Reviews play a big part in noteworthy book and noteworthy newcomers gaining attention.

National Book Critics Circle Launches Campaign to Save Book Reviews

April 23, 2007
For immediate release

Last week, the Los Angeles Times folded its book review section into an opinion section, and the Atlanta Journal-Constitution eliminated its book review position. Not a good week for book criticism, but not a surprising one, either: in the past few years, newspapers from the Chicago Tribune to the Dallas Morning News to the Village Voice have seen book coverage shrink.

The National Book Critics Circle (NBCC) is not taking these developments lying down. This week, in an effort to support book reviews, book editors, book pages, and book culture, the NBCC is launching a Campaign to Save Book Reviews. During the last week in April and throughout the month of May, the NBCC is asking authors and editors, journalists and publishers—and in fact anyone interested in literary culture—to speak out on the value of books and book reviewing.

The campaign’s launch pad is an effort to save the book review position at the Atlanta Journal-Constitution, held until last week by Teresa Weaver. Explains NBCC president John Freeman, “Teresa has the opportunity to apply for a job within the company, but it's not clear what the fate of the book page will be—whether it'll be reassigned to an existing editor, whether it will go entirely to wire copy, or whether it will be removed altogether.” A petition to save Weaver’s job has already secured nearly a thousand signatures, including those from luminaries as varied as Michael Connelly, Richard Powers, and Ian Rankin. Those interested in signing should go to
http://www.petitiononline.com/atl2007/petition.html.

Throughout the campaign, Critical Mass, the NBCC’s blog, will feature Q&As, posts by concerned writers, and advice on petitioning the media to assure continued book coverage. Current posts include a lengthy Q&A with David L. Ulin, editor of the Los Angeles Times Book Review. Check out
http://bookcriticscircle.blogspot.com/ to join in our efforts and to track developments in this ongoing and important campaign.

The National Book Critics Circle, founded in 1974, is a nonprofit, tax-exempt organization consisting of nearly 700 active book reviewers nationwide who are interested in honoring quality writing and communicating with one another about common concerns. It is managed by a 24-member all-volunteer board of directors. For more information, please go to
www.bookcritics.org.

For questions, contact Barbara Hoffert, hoffer [a t] reedbusiness.com or 646-746-6806.

Thursday, April 26, 2007

Interview with Tish Cohen

Tish Cohen is the author The Invisible Rules of the Zoe Lama, a middle grade novel forthcoming in July, 2007. She has edited an online women's magazine and contributed articles to some of Canada's largest newspapers, including The Globe and Mail and The National Post. She grew up in California, but currently lives in Toronto. Town House is her first novel. Visit her website at http://www.tishcohen.com/.




What book or project is coming out or has come out that you’d like to tell us about?

My debut novel, Town House, is coming out May 8th from HarperCollins. It’s about the son of a legendary rock star who is too crippled by panic attacks to leave his Boston town house.

Tell us about your journey to publication. How long did it take before your novel was published?

It took me about three years to get published. I’d secured agents for two books prior to Town House, but neither book sold. The second one came close. I probably received about twenty or thirty rejections from editors for those two novels. Town House sold in a bit of an unusual way. My agent sent it out to editors, who then sent it off to literary scouts, who took the manuscript to Hollywood studios. By the time I found out what was happening, about a dozen studios had it. The film rights sold a week after the manuscript went out, and the book sold a week after that. The film interest was so unexpected, it launched me into panic attacks of my very own!

What mistakes have you made while seeking publication?

In the tough times, believing the odds in this business are insurmountable.

What’s the best advice you’ve heard on writing/publication?

Keep moving forward. As long as you take the next step, there’s hope.

What is the worst piece of writing advice you’ve heard?

Many new writers get bogged down by the rules – for queries, for manuscripts, for sentence structure. If you write the way you speak your natural voice will surface and your writing will be seamless and compelling. I did everything wrong in my query letters—from comparing my book to others to repeating what my mother thought of it—but I made sure my voice was heard. And the query letters brought in requests.
What is something you wish you’d known earlier that might have saved you some time/frustration in the publishing business? That the industry wants something different—but not too different.

What are a few of your favorite books?

A Prayer for Owen Meany by John IrvingThe Accidental Tourist by Anne TylerWater for Elephants by Sara Gruen
Sideways by Rex Pickett
I am Not Myself These Days by Josh Kilmer-Purcell

Can you give us a view into a typical day of your writing life?

I write every day, weekends included. Typically, I get up and do yoga, eat and sit down at the computer by 9:30 am. Other than a quick lunch break, I work until about 7 pm. If I’m working on a first draft, I may work after dinner—until my eyes get scratchy or my hand cramps. I have absolutely no balance in my life. I’m working on that.

If you could choose to have one strength of another writer, what would it be and from whom?

I’d love to have Alan Hollinghurst’s sense of social subtleties.

Do you have a dream for the future of your writing, something you would love to accomplish?

My dream is for my characters and stories to really affect my readers, and to see some of my characters brought to life on the big screen.

What is your favorite and least favorite part of being a writer?

The best thing about being a writer is being able to make up stories all day long. The worst thing is the angst that goes along with exposing your soul.

How much marketing do you do? Any advice in this area?

I do a ton of marketing, everything from a MySpace page to website with interactive “What’s Your Phobia?” section, I blog with other debut authors on TheDebutanteBall.com, and I’ve hired an independent publicist. Another thing I did was contact as many sites that deal with anixiety or phobia I could find, and ask them to highlight Town House. Many did and my website gets quite a bit of traffic as a result.

Parting words?

The publishing world is made of ups and downs. Don’t let either distract you from what it’s all about—the words you’ll write today.


Novel Journey Critiques

Remember, our suggestions are just that—suggestions. The wise author will use discernment and pick up what works for him/her and ignore what doesn't. Our hope is you and this author, who bravely subbed his/her work, will benefit.

Our critique code is as follows:
( ) = suggest deleting
[ ] = sugges adding
** = comments
gws=goes without saying
rue=resist the urge to explain
im= interior monologue

Original Chapter

Houston, Texas – Three Years Earlier

Deborah crouched down in the bedroom closet behind the rows of hanging clothes. She could hear doors slamming and furniture being bumped around. She held her breath as the noises got closer to the bedroom. Suddenly, the knob on the bedroom door started to rattle.

“Let me in, baby. I promise I won’t hurt you again.” His words slurred as he begged for forgiveness.

Deborah remained quiet, hoping he would give up his quest and go away.
“Come on, honey. I said I was sorry. Let me in.” the door knob rattled with each word.

Deborah shifted her weight, trying to get comfortable among the shoes and other items on the floor of the closet. She knew from experience that she may have to stay in the closet all night. These little episodes were becoming all too familiar. If she weren’t so embarrassed, she would find a way to escape.

“Open the door, Deborah!” His voice grew louder. “You can’t lock me out of my own bedroom!”

Deborah jumped when he began to bang on the door. She hoped the lock and door frame were strong enough to prevent him from getting to her.

“You’re going to be sorry when I get in there.” He yelled.

Deborah was already sorry—sorry she had not heeded the warnings of her friends and family. They had not liked the way he had been controlling and possessive when they first starting dating and begged her not to marry him. But he had convinced her that he acted this way because he loved her so much. ‘I love you to death’ were his exact words. She hoped those words would not come true.

Livingston, Virginia – Present Day

Deborah was jolted awake in a panic. She held the covers under her chin as she listened in the darkness.

“Deborah, are you in there?” Derrick shouted as he knocked on the door.
Recognizing her brother’s voice, she went to open the door.

“What’s wrong? Why are you yelling like that?” she asked when she opened the door.

“I’ve been outside knocking for ten minutes. I was about to call the police. Didn’t you hear me?”

“I’m sorry Derrick. I took a sleeping pill. I haven’t been sleeping well lately.”
Derrick looked at his younger sister’s face. He had to admit that she looked haggard and drained.

“Is something bothering you? Is going to school and working too much for you?” Derrick asked.

Deborah didn’t want to tell her brother about the nightmares that had been haunting her for the past two months. She was getting very little sleep. They had become so real that she had become paranoid and jumpy with every loud noise. It was creating havoc on her school work and job.

“I’m sure I’ll be fine once we go on vacation. I just need a break from everything. I’ll be as good as new when we get back from Tennessee.”

Deborah, Derrick, and Ann were joining Tim, Leah and rest of the Sampson family for the Sampson’s family reunion. Since Tim and Leah’s wedding, Deborah had become a part of the Sampson family also. She was invited to family functions and on vacations and even baby-sat for Leah and Tim once a month, so they could have some time together without Tim II.

“Speaking of Tennessee, we’re leaving tomorrow morning at 6:00 A.M. Mrs. Sampson likes to get an early start and travel during the day, so she can see all of the sights.” Derrick explained.

“What sights?”

“Who knows…but what Mrs. Sampson wants, she usually gets.” Derrick said with a laugh as he left out of Deborah’s door.

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Tim turned off the paved road onto a narrow gravel road.

“Just when I thought we couldn’t any further into the country. Give me the city any day.” Tim said half joking, half serious.

“Oh, Timothy, it’s not that bad,” Bettie Sampson said to her son-in-law. “It’s a wonderful place to visit and relax.”

“You have no choice, but relax when there’s nothing around for miles.” Tim responded with a laugh.

Tim, Leah, Tim II, and Leah’s parents led the 850 mile caravan to Tennessee for the Hardin-Sampson family reunion. Leah was sure everyone was getting tired, including the Donald family, who was trailing them.

The trip had taken longer than normal, because they had to make frequent stops to pacify Tim II. Leah looked over at the sleeping toddler. He looked so peaceful. Who would think that he would have the energy of three children when he was awake? She was glad that Tim was in good physical condition, because she did not have enough stamina to keep up with Tim II twenty-four hours a day.

“Tim, the house is just around this curve on the right.” Clarence Sampson navigated from the front passenger seat.

Tim turned off the gravel road and maneuvered down the driveway through the huge oak trees toward the plantation style house that sat off the road. Even in the darkness with only the moonlight and the house lights, Tim could see the grandeur of the house. Mr. Sampson’s 83-year-old father shared the house with his 85-year-old sister, Bessie. The house had been in Bessie Sampson Hyatt’s late husband’s family for decades. Her brother Lawrence and his wife moved in after her husband’s death. Now it was just the two of them. Her sister-in-law, Clarence Sampson’s mother, had passed away ten years earlier.

“Wow, this house is gorgeous.” Tim remarked when he stopped in front of the two-story house. “I can’t wait to see the inside.”

“It’s been in the Hyatt family for years, but Aunt Bessie has lived here for forty years. I loved to come down here and play with my cousins. We brought Leah and Alex down here every summer. There’s nothing like the country to take your mind off the hustle and bustle of the big city.” Clarence explained.

Ane's Critique

This has the beginnings of a good tale. It made me want to read further. However (isn't there always a however?), a few things stand out to me. You need to study some books on the mechanics of writing, like Self-Editing for Fiction Writers, by Browne and King.

You overuse dialogue attributions. He said or she said should be an endangered species – save them. They "saids" pull the reader out of the story. Use action beats instead, unless there is a room full of people and you need one for clarity. But even then, a good action beat like: Derrick scratched his nose" works better than: he said as he scratched his nose. Remember – less is more.

Another thing that stood out is the overuse of names. When you only have two people, you can use he and she, but be careful you don't start every sentence with a pronoun.

You do a good job of writing then take away its power by over-explaining. Trust your reader to get it. Less is more.


There's a lot of red, but be encouraged. You're better than I was when I first started!

Houston, Texas – Three Years Earlier

Deborah crouched down in the bedroom closet behind the rows of hanging clothes. She [trembled, listening to] (could hear) doors slamming and furniture being [knocked](bumped) **knocked is more violent than bumped** around. She held her breath (as the noises got closer to the bedroom). Suddenly, the knob on the bedroom door (started to) rattle[d].

“Let me in, baby. I promise I won’t hurt you again.” His words slurred (as he begged for forgiveness).**gws**

(Deborah)[She] remained quiet, hoping he would give up (his quest) and go away. **RUE. Trust your reader to get it without spelling everything our**
“Come on, honey. I said I was sorry. Let me in.” (t)[T]he door knob [clanked](rattled) **or another sound, since you just used rattle** with each word.

Deborah shifted her weight, trying to get comfortable among the shoes and other items on the floor of the closet. She knew from experience that she may have to stay (in the closet) [there] all night. These little episodes were becoming all too familiar. If she weren’t so embarrassed, she would find a way to escape.

“Open the door, Deborah!” His voice grew louder. “You can’t lock me out of my own bedroom!”

(Deborah)[She] jumped when he (began to) bang[ed] on the door[, hoping](. She hoped) the lock and door frame were strong enough to prevent him from getting to her.

“You’re going to be sorry when I get in there.” (He yelled.) **I don’t think you need to say he yelled. The scene delivers that emotion just by its essence. You've shown the reader he's been drinking by his slurred words and I feel his anger. You've done a good ob at that, so don't go overboard. Trust yourself and your reader.**

(Deborah)[She] was already sorry—sorry she had not heeded the warnings of her friends and family. **Here is one of those places where you can use repetition to make a paragraph sing. If you said something like: [She was already sorry. Sorry she hadn’t heeded the warnings of her friends. Sorry she hadn't listened to her family.]** They (had not liked)[saw through him—saw how he manipulated her] (the way he had been controlling and possessive when they first starting dating) and begged her not to marry him. But he had convinced her (that he acted this way because) he loved her (so much). ‘I love you to death’ were his exact words. She hoped those words would not come true. **The changes I suggested are merely another way to do this. Any man who hurts a woman is controlling and possessive – it goes with the territory. I don't think you need to spell it out. It's obvious he's this way. Then you can also show this in later chapters instead of telling it here.**

Livingston, Virginia – Present Day

Deborah (was) jolted awake (in a panic). **Show her panic. How does panic feel? Does she break out in a sweat? Does her stomach churn? A reader wants to feel what she feels without being told she feels that way** She held the covers under her chin[, listening to] (as she listened in) the darkness.

“Deborah, are you in there?” Derrick shouted as he knocked on the door.

Recognizing her brother’s voice, she went to open the door.

“What’s wrong? Why are you yelling like that?” (she asked when s)[S]he opened the door. **It's obvious she asked the question. Use the action beat instead of a dialogue attribution.**

“I’ve been (outside)**gws** knocking for ten minutes. I was about to call the police. Didn’t you hear me?”

“I’m sorry (Derrick). I took a sleeping pill. I haven’t been sleeping well lately.”

(Derrick)[He] looked at [her](his younger sister’s face). (He had to admit that she looked haggard and drained.) **Major POV break. You've jumped inside Derrick's head to tell us how he feels.**

“Is something bothering you? Is going to school and working too much for you?” (Derrick asked.)

(Deborah)[She] didn’t want to tell (her brother)[him]**we already know it's her brother, you told us already. Trust your reader** about the nightmares that had been haunting her for the past two months. (She was getting very little sleep.)**gws** They had become so real that she['d] (had) become paranoid and jumpy with every loud noise. It was creating havoc on her school work and job. **Go through this chapter and count the number of times you use the word "had"**

“(I’m sure) I’ll be fine once we go on vacation. I just need a break from everything. I’ll be as good as new when we get back from Tennessee.”

Deborah, Derrick, and Ann **who are Ann and Tim and Leah? You're given us names without telling us who they are. And who are the Sampson's? If Deborah is one or her brother, their last names should be given when they are first introduced. This created confusion** were joining Tim, Leah and rest of the Sampson family for the Sampson’s family reunion. Since Tim and Leah’s wedding, Deborah had become a part of the Sampson family also. She was invited to family functions and on vacations and even baby-sat for Leah and Tim once a month, so they could have some time together without Tim II. **I think you can convey this information through dialogue much better. It feels like an information dump**

“Speaking of Tennessee, we’re leaving tomorrow morning at 6:00 A.M. Mrs. Sampson likes to get an early start and travel during the day, so she can see all of the sights.” (Derrick explained.)

“What sights?”

“Who knows…but what Mrs. Sampson wants, she usually gets.” Derrick (said with a) laugh[ed] as he (left)[walked] out (of Deborah’s)[the] door. **RUE-we know whose door it is – trust your reader to remember those things**

###

Tim **Tim WHO? When you fist introduce a POV character for the first time, use his first and last name** turned off the paved road onto a narrow gravel road.

“Just when I thought we couldn’t any further into the country. Give me the city any day.” (Tim said half joking, half serious.).

[Bettie Sampson chuckled at her son-in-law.] “Oh, Timothy, it’s not that bad[.](,”) (Bettie Sampson said to her son-in-law.) (“)It’s a wonderful place to visit and relax.”

“You have no choice, but relax when there’s nothing around for miles.” (Tim responded with a laugh.) **You identified it was Tim who she was speaking to, so you don't need a dialogue tag or an action beat here**

(Tim, Leah, Tim II, and Leah’s parents) **Too much information, too many names** led the 850 mile caravan to Tennessee for the Hardin-Sampson family reunion. Leah was sure everyone was getting tired, including the Donald family, who was trailing them. **With every sentence and paragraph you write, ask yourself, "Does this advance the story? Is it really needed?" I don’t think this paragraph is needed. Is the order in which they travel really important? If so, a simple car one lead the caravan. Period**

The trip (had taken)[took] longer than normal, because they had to make frequent stops to pacify Tim II. Leah looked over at the (sleeping) toddler [sleeping peacefully]. (He looked so peaceful.) Who would think (that) he['d] (would) have the energy of three children when he was awake? (She was glad that Tim was in good physical condition, because she did not have enough stamina to keep up with Tim II twenty-four hours a day.)

“Tim, the house is just around this curve on the right.” Clarence Sampson navigated from the front passenger seat. **GOOD! You used an action beat instead of a dialogue tag**

Tim turned off the gravel road and maneuvered down the driveway through the huge oak trees toward the plantation[-]style house that sat off the road. **I'd suggest breaking that last sentence into two. You'd get more impact out of it.** Even in the darkness with only the moonlight and the house lights, Tim could see the grandeur of the house. **This last sentence gives nothing. I don't SEE the grandeur of the house. All I see is that it's dark, no it's moonlit and the lights are on. SHOW me this grand house. Maybe have them come around the bend and stop. Bathed in moonlight, the large mansion appeared to float in the ground fog – or something like that. Let your reader SEE it with them.** **New paragraph here**Mr. Sampson’s 83-year-old father shared the house with his 85-year-old sister, Bessie. The house had been in Bessie Sampson Hyatt’s late husband’s family for decades. Her brother Lawrence and his wife moved in after her husband’s death. Now it was just the two of them. Her sister-in-law, Clarence Sampson’s mother, had passed away ten years earlier. **All this information has just stopped the flow of your story. I suggest you use dialogue for this. Is it Deborah's first time here? If now, I'd suggest you change it to be hers, then she could ask about it. But otherwise, this information is author intrusion and broke the spell of the story.**

“Wow, this house is gorgeous.” Tim remarked when he stopped in front of the two-story house. “I can’t wait to see the inside.” **There you go – Tim hasn’t been there. So have him ask about it and someone give the info in dialogue. Then it won't be intrusive.**

“It’s been in the Hyatt family for [generations](years), but Aunt Bessie has lived here for forty years. **Oh my word. Here you did use dialogue to tell us what you told us above. Put it all in dialogue. The info will then be interesting.** I loved to come down here and play with my cousins. We brought Leah and Alex down here every summer. There’s nothing like the country to take your mind off the hustle and bustle of the big city.” (Clarence explained.) **To have Clarence deliver this speech, I'd suggest you put an action beat after the first sentence: ....forty years." Clarence pointed to the side yard. "I loved .....

Gina's Take

Thanks for submitting. You've got the elements of a good story but have some story mechanics to work on which we've all had to learn, one step at a time.

I suggest you concentrate first on learning to show vs tell. This story was mainly telling. "She could hear" is telling. "Footsteps slammed down the hallway" would be showing.

"Heard", "Saw", "Felt", "Tasted" etc. words are telling. Be on the look out for them in your writing. Also "was" tends to be a telling word and passive.

Another thing you could focus on would be being specific. Instead of "noise got closer", you'd say what the noises were and show them getting closer.

One last thing I'd have you look at would be showing and telling. You don't need to do both. ie. "I won't hurt you again" his words slurred as he begged her. You show us him begging, don't also tell us.

Don't be discouraged. We've all had to learn these basics. It's a predictable path of the novelist and you're on your way.

Jessica's Take

I would consider this submission not to be ready to pitch yet but still needing work. Some areas that need to be improved:

--Shifting of POV. It's my opinion this writer isn't ready to write omniscient. Ex: Second scene, the shifting from Deborah to her brother. "Derrick looked at his younger sister’s face. He had to admit that she looked haggard and drained."

--Dialogue that sounds unnatural. Ex: “Speaking of Tennessee, we’re leaving tomorrow morning at 6:00 A.M." It's hard to believe she went to bed not knowing that.

--Information drops. "Deborah, Derrick, and Ann were joining Tim, Leah and rest of the Sampson family for the Sampson’s family reunion. Since Tim and Leah’s wedding, Deborah had become a part of the Sampson family also. She was invited to family functions and on vacations and even baby-sat for Leah and Tim once a month, so they could have some time together without Tim II." That could have shown rather than told.

--not capturing the reader's emotions they way I think the writer intends. I was not afraid for Deborah after the first paragraph. "Deborah shifted her weight, trying to get comfortable among the shoes and other items on the floor of the closet. She knew from experience that she may have to stay in the closet all night. These little episodes were becoming all too familiar. If she weren’t so embarrassed, she would find a way to escape." This does not sound like the mindset of someone in the state of panic. She seems rational and a little annoyed and somewhat embarrassed.

To the writer, don't lose heart. That is the struggle all writers face 'how to show not tell'. It takes work and practice. Don't forget to layer in the five senses. It sounds like the first husband is coming back to stalk his wife, which is always an interesting plot.

Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Author Interview ~ Linda Nichols



Linda Nichols, a graduate of the University of Washington, is a novelist with a unique gift for touching readers' hearts with her stories. She is also the author of the acclaimed novels If I Gained the World and At the Scent of Water. She and her family make their home in Tacoma, Washington.

I loved At the Scent of Water. What new book or project do you have coming out?

In Search of Eden came out in February. It’s the story of a restless young woman who decides to find the child she gave up for adoption. All she has to go on is a baby picture of the child and a postmark on a faded envelope. Her search puts her on a collision course with a broken family and their guardian, a police detective who suspects her of being up to no good.

How did you come up with your stories? Is there a specific “what if” moment?

There’s usually a “what if” moment that gets the story started. After that there are many other questions that I ask myself, and answer with varying degrees of success. What kind of person would make this decision? Why would they make it? Who else would be there? And I think the most important questions for plotting are what do they want and what’s keeping them from getting it? If you create lovable characters with flaws and put their hearts’ desires at odds with one another, a good story will follow. Provided you can figure out how to end it!

Tell us about your publishing journey. How long had you been writing before you got a contract? How did you find out and what went through your mind?

I had been writing seriously for about six or seven years when I sold my first book, Handyman. Although I’d been attending a workshop at the community college and had written articles for a local parenting magazine, Handyman was my first completed novel, and I sold it pretty quickly. I sent out query letters and three weeks later had an agent who had sold the movie and publishing rights for what seemed like an overwhelming sum of money to me. The agents involved told me a little about their plans for the movie, and I was more than hesitant. I had seen some of the director’s work and thought it was pretty raw. In fact, I had walked out of one of his movies. When I made the decision to accept their offer I remember thinking, “Well, I guess everyone has their price.”

The next few years were strange. Although we had plenty of money, our family became troubled. By the time God helped relieve us of that money through some financial reversals, I was more than ready to turn back to Him. At that time I began thinking about why God had given me the gift of writing. Things came clear to me one day when I was touched by the words of a song, and a quiet voice reminded me, “Linda, someone wrote that.” I realized then that if I could write for Him it would be a great honor. He’s been gracious enough to allow me to do that. I wouldn’t go back for a million dollars!

Do you ever struggle with writer's block? If so, how do you overcome it?

As a matter of fact, I have struggled a great deal with writer’s block, especially over the last few years. I wish I had an easy answer, but for me the key to moving past it was in a wonderful book by Victoria Nelson, On Writer’s Block. I think the causes of my problems had to do with self-criticism and pressure to produce on a deadline. I still struggle, but I think the key has been to try to approach writing as play, to be gentle on myself as far as criticizing content, to let go of trying to make things perfect, and staying at it instead of quitting when I hit an obstacle. It comes down to faith—believing that if I show up God will help me.

Where do you write? Do you have a dedicated office or a corner or nook in a room?

I write in the corner of the bedroom. I’ve tried renting an office and for a while had a writing room, but I really enjoy my little corner the most.

Do you have a word or page goal you set for each day?

No. For me that’s not helpful at all.

What does a typical day look like for you?

I wish I were different, but when I’m writing hard, I usually get up late and stay up late. I may not start writing until afternoon, but I may write until ten or so at night. Which means I’m too wound up to get to sleep until very late (or early) which virtually guarantees that the next day will be on the same schedule. I also tend not to get out much when I’m writing hard, which in the long run is not good for my mental health. I’d like to build healthier patterns of writing so that life wouldn’t be completely on hold, but that’s an area I struggle with.

What’s the best writing advice you’ve heard?

My first writing teacher, Kathy Keller, listened to me tell her that I was a little embarrassed that I didn’t have the desire or apparently the ability to write literary fiction. “I like characters like Andy Griffith, and I can get into a Matlock.” After we shared a laugh she said, “Write your stories, Linda.” Whenever I lose my way as a writer I remember that. I have to write my stories, not the ones I think are going to sell or the ones better left to someone else.

What do you wish you’d known early in your career that might have saved you some time and/or frustration in writing? In publishing?

I wish I’d known a couple of things. That publishing is a business, and I shouldn’t take things personally. Also I wish I’d understood that I could spend a lot of money and time and emotional anguish trying to make success happen, but ultimately, it’s God who determines my portion. I also wish I had known that money and success shouldn’t be confused with contentment and fruitfulness.

How much marketing do you do? What have you found that particularly works well for you?

I’m fortunate to have a wonderful hands-on agent, Theresa Park, and a fantastic marketing team at Bethany House. In conjunction with them, I have a Web site and a newsletter. I occasionally speak to reading groups or women’s groups and do occasional book signings. One new idea we’re pursuing is conducting telephone interviews with reading groups around the country. I believe we’re also planning to give copies of the book to reading groups to see if they would like to choose it as a selection.

Do you have any parting words of advice?

Yes, two things, actually. First, I see something like desperation in writers who desire to be published, and although I’m so grateful for the privilege, I would say that having your book published won’t make you happy. It still comes down to the writing process. If you enjoy writing, write. Don’t allow the publishing world’s verdict to determine your joy. Sometimes I think there’s more joy in writing before publication than after. And that’s where the best writing comes from—that well of joy.

Second, I would say, don’t write what you think will sell or what everyone else is writing. Just write your stories.

Tuesday, April 24, 2007

Book Award Series ~ ECPA

A wife, mother, and grandma, Yvonne Anderson lives in rural Ohio. She's a former legal secretary, currently a professional Virtual Assistant, and writes a daily Bible study blog. She creates fiction just for fun, but sometimes entertains fantasies about real remuneration.




By Yvonne Anderson


When you hear the phrase "Christian books," a variety of images might come to mind. The New Testament, perhaps. Or a vision of cowled monks toiling over parchments by flickering candlelight. Perhaps you recall the plodding progress of Pilgrim through the Sea of Despond, hear the roar of Aslan the metaphorical lion, or remember a scene from a breezy prairie romance. Frank Peretti's angels and demons might lurk in your subconscious, or the bestselling Left Behind series might linger in your mind.

Although Christian writings have filled libraries for centuries and comprise some of the world's most beloved literature, at first the disciples carried Christianity orally, not literally, into the world. Its founder wrote nothing, and His earliest followers continued this course. Expecting His imminent return – and perhaps because they believed the current scriptures (our Old Testament) pointed toward Christianity and needed no supplement – they didn't seem to give writing a thought for the first fifteen years or so after the resurrection.

Eventually, though, the written gospels appeared, and along with the letters of Paul, a new force gathered strength until it became a great tide. The volume of Christian writings flooding the world in the second century AD reached amazing proportions, and helped turn the Greco-Roman world upside-down. Though most of this literature is lost to us today, we're aware of its quantity due in part to the writings of Eusebius, a bishop of Caesarea and a prolific writer. Also a voracious reader and avid chronicler, he kept a record of everything he read. The list of "Christian books" he waded through is overwhelming. These writings ranged from apologetics, scripture interpretation, works on doctrine, and letters by the early church fathers.

Christian fiction came late to the scene. For centuries, most fiction was based on Christian ideas. Early examples include Paradise Lost, Dante's Inferno, and The Pilgrim's Progress. But after the emphasis of literature shifted from edification to entertainment, fiction took a different direction. People wanted to be tickled, not tutored, and that left Christians with a hunger for fiction that didn't offend.
The specific genre of the Christian novel arose some decades ago, first written by and for Christians and sold only in Christian bookshops. But in the late 20th century, Christian-themed fiction began to be welcomed by general audiences, giving believers a new venue for introducing the unchurched masses to scriptural truths in a non-threatening way.

The Evangelical Christian Publishers Association was founded in 1974 for the purpose of supporting quality and integrity in Christian publishing. As a part of this mission, they began in 1978 to present yearly awards for excellence in Christian publishing. The ECPA Christian Book Awards (formerly Gold Medallion Book Awards) selects winners in six categories: Bibles; Fiction; Children & Youth; Inspiration & Gift; Bible Reference & Study; and Christian Life. The winners are announced at the CBA and ECPA Awards Celebration held in conjunction with the Christian Retail Show each summer.

Last summer, awards went to the modern Bible version, The Message, and to the stuffy-sounding Dictionary for Theological Interpretation of the Bible; to Teen Virtue by Vicki Courtney, A Sacred Sorrow by Michael Card, and to Wooden & Carty's Coach Wooden's Pyramid of Success. The fiction award went to Joel Rosenberg for The Ezekiel Option. Fiction winners of past years include Oceans Apart by Karen Kingsbury and Love's Long Journey by Janette Oke. R.C. Sproul's Johnny Come Home and The Water Is Wide by Elizabeth Gibson shared the honors in 1985; and Joyce Landorf's I Came To Love You Late took the first fiction award, in 1978.

Books are submitted by publishers, not individuals, and entries must be published in the year preceding the year in which the awards are presented. (That is, for the 2007 Awards, all entries must be published for the first time in 2006.)

Each category has its own description and judging criteria. More information is available at
http://www.ecpa.org/christianbookawards , including the complete official rules and an entry form for 2007. But if fiction is what you're interested, I'll save you the trouble of looking it up: This award is for full-length, narrative writing whose source is the imagination of the author and whose intended audience is adults. Submissions are judged according to characterization, plot, theme, writing style/mechanics, cover design and layout, and the impact on the reader, including whether or not all story elements are consistent with a Christian worldview. Judges are asked to determine if the reader's mind and spirit are stimulated and enlightened by the experience of reading the novel in question.

I don't know about you, but my mind and spirit feel stimulated to write something worthy of this award! See you in 2008?

Monday, April 23, 2007

Author Interview ~ Christy Scannell



Christy Scannell is the associate editor of The San Diego Metropolitan, a monthly business magazine, and the North Park News, a community newspaper. She is also a freelance editor and writer. She is a mentor for the Christian Writers Guild and a staff member of The Christian Communicator. She has developed and edited over a hundred books including The Christian Girl's Guide to... series.



What book or project is coming out or has come out that you’d like to tell us about?

Desperate Pastors’ Wives, the first in the three-book “Secrets from Lulu’s Café” series by moi and co-author, Ginger Kolbaba
(Howard Books/Simon & Schuster)

Tell us about your journey to publication. How long had you been writing before you got the call you had a contract, how you heard and what went through your head.

If you are a frustrated, unpublished writer, you might want to skip my answer to this question because our road to publication was embarrassingly easy. We conceived of the book idea in March 2005 and wrote the proposal, which we presented to a prospective agent in April. He rejected it, but his comments helped us reevaluate our proposal. Then a fiction editor friend offered to take a look at it. She made further suggestions, and also said she heard Howard was looking for a new fiction series. After we redid the proposal, we sent it to Howard. An editor responded within a few weeks. We had a contract for a three-book series before summer ended.

Now, before you start looking for my Cinderella slippers, let me add some explanation to this story. First of all, Ginger and I both had worked in CBA publishing for around ten years — she as a magazine editor and me as a book editor. With that came frequent travels to writers’ conferences where we networked and learned from our colleagues. So that editor at Howard already knew us before she read our work, and we knew how to present it in such a way that it would be attractive to a publisher (the catchy title and marketing potential were paramount).

Plus, we had both been writing for years. I had written for many magazines and newspapers, and Ginger had published three non-fiction books. Still, this was our first fiction effort, so we were floored when the first publisher we approached not only contracted for one book, but three!

Do you still experience self-doubts regarding your work?

Oh, my goodness, yes! I keep telling friends who find out about our book not to expect Steinbeck or anything! I have so much respect for fiction writers and I never dreamed I would be in their ranks, so I’ll probably have to write twenty novels before I ever consider myself a novelist. Literary fiction authors in particular just slay me with how they craft their characters and stories.

That said, I think there is room for all of us out here, and as long as people continue buying what I write, I’ll keep producing it. If that ever stops, I’ll know it’s time to finally go clean out the garage and keep my “stories” to myself!

What mistakes have you made while seeking publication?

We handled our contract negotiations ourselves because we were familiar with contracts and knew and trusted the acquisitions editor. I thought Howard was quite generous considering we were unknown fiction authors, but I do wonder sometimes what an agent would have done differently.

What’s the best advice you’ve heard on writing/publication?

“Keep a notebook and pen every place you go.”

I heard this from a speaker at a journalism event my senior of college, and I’ve tried to follow his advice. I have something to write on next to my bed, in my purse, in my car and next to my chair in the family room. You never know when you’re going to hear a cool word you want to use, or want to jot down an idea, and while you think you’ll remember it later, if you’re scatterbrained like me you probably won’t. I love looking through my notebooks.

What’s the worst piece of writing advice you’ve heard?

“Write what you know.”

If I only ever wrote what I knew, I’d never have a byline! There have been periodical stories I’ve dreaded doing that ended up being some of my favorites because of the engaging sources. I love learning about new people and things. But, there are definitely topics — such as finance — that I find to be a real yawner and probably would avoid depending on the slant.

What’s something you wish you’d known earlier that might have saved you some time/frustration in the publishing business?

Having come from the business, I was prepared for how the publishing process would proceed. I understand the peculiarities of CBA book publishing.

Is there a particularly difficult set back that you’ve gone through in your writing career you are willing to share?

When my former employer moved across the country, I decided to go freelance. However, after ten years of mostly editing children’s books, I had to reestablish a network for getting writing and editing jobs. This was frustrating at first (and sometimes still is) because I know there are publishers and publications out there looking for writers, but making that connection can be difficult. Still, freelancing is one of the best decisions I ever made.

What are a few of your favorite books? (Not written by you.)

As a child, my absolute favorite was Harriet the Spy — and that may be why I’m so comfortable carrying around notebooks! I’ve enjoyed all kinds of books over the years, but lately I’ve been focusing on non-fiction because I can’t read fiction when I’m writing it. (Don’t want to unintentionally plagiarize!) I loved Julia Child’s My Life in France and Ruth Reichl’s Garlic and Sapphires.

What piece of writing have you done that you’re particularly proud of and why?

I hate to state the obvious, but Desperate Pastors’ Wives is a real achievement for me on so many levels. It’s my first published book, my first fiction, and my first collaboration. Knowing I have the perseverance and skill to write a novel has opened up a whole new world of opportunity for me.

Do you have a pet peeve having to do with this biz?

CBA has copycat syndrome. Right now, everyone is dashing to get their anti-The Secret books out. A couple of years ago, it was anti-The Da Vinci Code. I’m not saying that as Christians we shouldn’t respond when the world strays, but I wish we could lead the curve more than follow it.

Can you give us a view into a typical day of your writing life?

Ah, there is no typical day and that’s what I love about it! If you visit my Web site, you’ll see I am a night person, so I do the bulk of my work after 4 p.m. But I also have responsibilities with the magazine and newspaper where I am associate editor, so sometimes I have to leave the house as early as 10 a.m. (I know, the horror!) to head downtown to our publication offices. I often end up working way more than forty hours per week, but the advantage is I can structure my own schedule around housework, errands, and social activities.

If you could choose to have one strength of another writer, what would it be and from whom?

I would love to have Truman Capote’s ability to write about his childhood so vividly without resulting to precious images. There is a fine line between classic memoir and a family journal.

I wonder how he saw through the tears to get anything on paper.

Do you have a dream for the future of your writing, something you would love to accomplish?

Yeah, make enough money to retire! Seriously, I hope I can continue to create work that touches people in meaningful ways even if I never can afford to remodel my kitchen. It is an honor to have a skill that brings so much joy and understanding to people. If my life’s work causes just one person to grow closer to God, then I’m happy. What better results could I ask for? (Well, sure, I’d take the new kitchen, too, but that just means I have to cook more, right? There’s always a bright side!)

Was there ever a time in your writing career you thought of quitting?

Every time I am on deadline! I often wonder why I don’t go do something “normal” instead, like push papers in an office. But then someone e-mails me a compliment on something I wrote and I vow never to leave this profession. It’s a vicious cycle of exhaustion and exhilaration!

What is your favorite and least favorite part of being a writer?

My favorite part is talking to sources. We spoke to many for our series, and I regularly interview people for articles. I find people absolutely fascinating, and I’ve never met a person who does not have at least one interesting tidbit to share, although some do require more prodding than others. My husband has to remind me at parties that I’m not working, otherwise I question people to death!

My least favorite part is the financial insecurity. Jobs and profits seem to ebb and flow. I have to remind myself constantly that this is where God wants me and he will take care of me.

How much marketing do you do? Any advice in this area?

I have a Web site and I always carry business cards because you never know where you might meet a potential client (I’ve met a few on planes, for example). I periodically send reminder e-mails to editors I know who look for freelancers, just to remind them I’m still around.

It is important to think like the person who might be interested in you rather than the person you are. Ask yourself questions such as:
Why would publication X want to do a story on my new book?
Why would this magazine want me to write this story? What is the take-away for the readers?
What makes me stand out from all the others looking to get published?

Parting words?

Thanks for reading this far! :)

I think the best thing an unpublished writer can do is attend writers’ conferences. These conferences are unique chances to meet with editors, network with colleagues, and enhance your skills. Even advanced writers can benefit from conferences such as Mt. Hermon. It is money well spent, believe me!

Sunday, April 22, 2007

Sunday Devotion: Reality Verses Dreams

Janet Rubin


Why is it that the idea of things is often so much more attractive than the actual doing of them? The romantic picture as opposed to reality?

The way learning seems so exciting when shopping for school supplies in late August, for example. How easy it was growing up, once armed and adorned with new stuff, to envision myself hunched over books, studying, making careful notes on the thin blue lines of my notebook with my sparkly pencils, or writing A+ papers and working out difficult math problems. How could someone not excel with a Bon Jovi binder or a Garfield lunch box? But how quickly my enthusiasm waned the first night I had to actually sit down and do home work. In spite of everything, it was after all still just work—reading, studying, memorizing.

Or when I was pregnant with my first child, how sweet was the picture in my mind as I decorated the nursery- me, rocking in a chair, nursing my infant by the moonlight that would stream in the window. Several months later I grew to dread those midnight squawks that came from that pink, lacy crib and dragged me from the warmth of my own bed. Caring for baby in the middle of the night was bleary-eyed misery. I wanted to sleep!

Likewise, there is great discrepancy between my ideas about the writing life and the reality of it. I have romantic images stored up in my mind of what an author does. I envision scribes of old, dipping pen in ink by lamplight at antique desks, those of more recent past pounding out stories on typewriters, lost in the passion of creating. My perfect writing fantasy involves me in a secluded mountainside cabin in Maine, typing the days away, breaking only to brew more coffee or take a morning hike.

When I first decided to get serious about my writing, I outfitted myself with all the necessary tools—a desk and computer, stacks of how-to-write books, a thesaurus, dictionary, and a little notebook I thought I’d carry everywhere to record all of my creative thoughts. I thought I’d write character sketches in waiting rooms, practice writing description on the playground, and think of profound metaphors in the grocery line. After spending my mornings cleaning and home schooling my children, I imagined myself typing away the afternoons, producing fiction as fast as my family produces dirty clothes.

Like the first night of homework, reality hit me as soon as my behind hit the computer chair. Writing is work. It’s rarely romantic. There are distractions and boredom and a never-ending temptation to check email. I’m too lazy to look anything up in the thesaurus, I don’t know where that little notebook is and all I think about in the grocery line is whether I should get the regular or king-sized Reese’s Peanut Butter Cups for the ride home.

But. When I push past the laziness, ignore the email and the dirty clothes, and type until the flow begins (this may take an hour or a week), I find myself lost in an experience that is exciting. As the story unfolds, my excitement builds. And when it is done, I am filled with satisfaction. The satisfaction has nothing to do with how cute my writing corner is or those books on writing I haven’t read. It’s all because of the act of creation. And when I look at the finished product, I know the making of it wasn’t all passion and romance, but part misery.

My idea of Christianity can become skewed as well. I listen to some preacher on the radio or get all worked up at a women’s conference, pumped up by powerfully delivered sermons, enthusiastic worship, and joyous crowds. Yes, I think, I’m going to do it. I’m a’livin’ for Jesus from now on. Ain’t nothin’ gonna get me down. Caught up in the euphoria, I can imagine the rest of my life to be some kind of continual praise-fest.

Then I go home. Sweeping the floor, breaking up bouts of sibling rivalry, picking up the clothes my husband leaves on the floor, staring at a blank computer screen with nary an idea in sight—in the midst of these mundane things of daily life, I realize living for Jesus is work. Sitting to pray and read the Word is something I need to force myself to do some days. There are dry spells when my prayers are not passionate, when my heart is not thankful, when I feel like giving something less than joyful, humble service to my family.

Jesus said, “Take up your cross and follow Me.” While our lives may not involve the persecution some Christians around the world experience, this Christian life is a cross. It isn’t all halleluiahs and amens. It’s discipline, faithfulness, endurance, resisting temptation, and seeking. But it isn’t a cross without reward. When we seek, we find. When we follow, we are lead. When we resist Satan, he flees. When we are faithful, we grow. When we trust and obey, we are filled with joy.

I think that ultimately the idea of things is deceptive. Most things worth having don’t come free. Education, good writing, and a godly life are very good things. Not easy, not dreamy and romantic, definitely not free. But very worth having.

Hebrews 12:2Let us fix our eyes on Jesus, the author and perfecter of our faith, who for the joy set before him endured the cross, scorning its shame, and sat down at the right hand of the throne of God.

Lord,Please help me to let go of my unrealistic notions and to be willing to live out the reality of what You’ve set before me. Thank You that there is joy before me. I admit that I don’t have what it takes to carry this cross. Please make me strong, fill me with Your Spirit, and walk with me every moment. I need You. I do want to write well, and more importantly to be godly. Have Your way with me, Lord. Amen

Saturday, April 21, 2007

Some Happenings in the Book World

We are pleased to report that The Road by Cormac McCarthy (Alfred A. Knopf) took the 2007 Pulitzer Prize for Fiction. To see the full list of the 2007 Pulitzer winners (you mean there are other books besides fiction?) please visit: http://www.pulitzer.org/

This past week, the shortlist for Orange Broadband Prize for Fiction was announced. Here they are:

Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie Half of a Yellow Sun (Fourth EstateRachel Cusk Arlington Park) Faber and FaberKiran Desai The Inheritance of Loss (Hamish Hamilton)

Xiaolu Guo A Concise Chinese-English Dictionary for Lovers (Chatto & Windus)
Jane Harris The Observations (Faber and Faber)
Anne Tyler Digging to America (Chatto & Windus)

Winners will be announced in London, June 6th

Book Festivals:

The 12th Annual Los Angeles Times Festival of Books is upcoming (April 27th) For more info visit:
http://www.latimes.com/extras/bookprizes/

For those of you in PA, the Philadelphia Book Festival starts tomorrow ( Saturday & Sunday, April 21-22) for more information visit:
http://www.philadelphiabookfestival.org/index.htm

Friday, April 20, 2007

Novel Journey's Interview with Dog Eared Design





Tell us about Dog Eared Design, how you started and what you do.

Dog Eared Design is a small design studio which focuses almost exclusively on book cover design. The name represents a well-cherished book, one that has the battle scars to show for it’s numerous readings. I also have two golden retrievers that lay at my feet as I work, so there’s a double meaning. I’ve been working in the publishing industry since the early 90’s as an art director/designer at two publishing houses and a design firm. I made the scary but correct decision to fly solo three years ago.








How do you choose the theme of the cover to best describe the book? Do you send a questionnaire to the publisher/author? If so, can we post it?

I personally don’t have a questionnaire, but instead, work from the material that publishers provide. Different publishers provide different amounts of information but generally I’m given a brief synopsis from one paragraph to numerous pages long, told who the target reader is, and I’m given similar titles in the genre. For fiction it’s helpful to have character sketches and a chapter-by-chapter breakdown of the book, highlighting the key moments, which could be used for the cover. Sometimes I’m given specific design directions and suggestions, but usually simple adjectives like “edgy,” “nostalgic,” or “romantic” are given to describe the book. Now and again I get a manuscript, but the cover is often designed before the book is completed. That way it can be marketed before it’s printed.


Cover-wise what sells a book?

The best covers create a mood rather than tell the whole story. Simple and impactful is better than busy and overworked. As a designer I’ve learned that if a book sells it’s well written, but if it doesn’t sell it must have been the cover. I’m obviously kidding, I’d like to say that when a book I’ve designed is on the NY Times best-sellers list that the cover had something to do with the success. But then again I’m humbled when bad designs do equally well or better. So what am I saying? I have no idea what sells a book.










Does it help when publishers or authors have examples of other books in their genre that appeal to them?

Absolutely. Knowing what a client likes, and equally as useful, what they don’t like, helps substantially. Because I work in so many genres, I like to reference Amazon for the design trends in specific markets before I start a project.


What colors are more marketable than others?

I’m sure the success of Good to Great had a lot to do with the powerful red cover.
However, I don’t usually start a design thinking what color I need to make it. Color flows out of the design process. It’s always good to be aware of color trends and be appropriate for the genre.




Do certain colors go better with certain genres?

Yes. Business books are often bright and arresting. Horror is dark, romance and historical fiction is generally warm, but there are no clear-cut rules, thank goodness.

How do you keep covers from looking cliché?

I try not to be too obvious in my work. I’m constantly on the lookout for good photography, typefaces, textures, and designs. When the muse doesn’t show up I’ll go to these folders for inspiration.

Over the years I’ve worked on a number of books with similar subject matters such as marriage, prayer, dating, etc. It’s a challenge to approach each cover from a different perspective. Two years ago Narnia was very popular because of the then upcoming movie. During this time I was assigned four different books about Narnia from four different publishers. A couple of them are shown. The obvious challenge was to make each one unique and not upset the publishers by having designs too similar.









What was your most challenging book cover and why?

I don’t want to be too specific, but the most difficult covers tend to be the ones that are very important to the publishers. Often these covers don’t turn out as well because too many people get involved. The end result can be a cover that no one hates, but no one particularly loves either. The fun covers are the ones that I’m given a lot of freedom with. So, ironically, most of my favorite covers are for smaller named authors with lower print runs. Take Landon Snow for example. A book that was a lot of fun and very low pressure, but became a best-seller.






What book cover have you received the most response about? Tell me about the process of making this cover.

I love reading historical biographies, so I was excited when a Civil War series was sent my way. The challenge was to make the cover look authentic to the time period and visually represent how opposite the two generals were. Lee, the noble leader of the South, vs. Hooker, the not so noble leader from the North, from whom the term “hookers” was derived. Their opposition is shown by each man facing the opposite direction and is reinforced by the oval vs. square frames.

I really like the subtly of it. The publisher printed the jacket on an uncoated paper stock, which really added to the antiquity of the design. I immersed myself in the time period by doing a lot of research on the web and looking through a number of books on the subject. The images of the generals came from the Library of Congress, the textures and panel came from istockphoto.com. Letterheadfonts.com and Archivetype.com are great resources for antique fonts.


How expensive are the royalties on art?

The easy answer is “that depends." Getty Images , for example, offers three ways to purchase image usage; Royalty-Free (preferred!), Rights-Managed (Evil), and Rights-Ready, which is somewhere in between. The cost is dependant on factors such as print-run, domestic and or international, and how much real-estate the image takes up on the cover. I always try to use Royalty-free which is cheapest and, as the name implies, has limited restrictions. I often create “original” art by messing with multiple images. The teen fiction cover “In Between” is an example of using numerous photos to create a unique image.




Once a cover is completed, is the picture or image used on the cover copyrighted?

The publisher owns the design but not the image. In rare cases the image can be purchased as an exclusive, but that is amazingly expensive. Some stock houses will not allow images to be used more than once for a specific market.






Where do you find the images you use?

My favorite place to find imagery is

http://www.istockphoto.com/. Though there’s a mix of good and bad imagery the price and selection is unbeatable at $4 to $12 a pop. They also have a designer spotlight area where designers can post their work showing how they used istock images. I’ve posted some of my work at: http://www.istockphoto.com/user_view.php?id=326702
For the price, I also like
http://www.photos.com/, and http://www.shutterstock.com/.
Super Stock is great to work with. Getty and Corbis have wonderful imagery but you’d need a pretty healthy photo budget to use them.


How do you avoid looking like other covers on the market?

I like to design outside the box, but not too far out. Generally when I give a publisher design options I’ll give them something that I like, something I think they’ll like, and something in line with what’s selling in the genre. It’s up to them how “edgy” they want to be. I’ve learned that keeping publishers happy is more important than keeping myself happy as a designer. Of course it’s wonderful when both occur.


We've noticed that the model featured on the cover, often has similar features to the author (ex: length and coloring of hair.) Is that to make the cover more palatable?

That’s an amusing observation! Personally I rarely meet or e-mail authors directly, but almost always work through the publishers. So if a character looks like the author, it’s purely coincidental.


How often (in your experience) does the author have say over the final results?

Very often. And as you would expect, the bigger the name the more pull an author has.
I like to know up front if an author has something specific in mind.


How many hours go into a book cover?

It’s hard to break it down into hours, because there is a lot of back and fourth tweaking this and changing that, but it’s good to have two full working days into the first round of comps. I like to have three weeks or more to develop them which allows me time to juggle other projects in different stages of production.

If an author is planning on self-publishing, how much doe it cost to hire you to do a cover?

Ah, the question that scares much of my potential work away. Because I’m a one-man shop I can only take on so much work and still have time for family and have a life. I do ask a premium for cover design. I’m always happy to quote on a project-by-project basis. How’s that for not answering directly? I’ve been thinking about going into politics.

How many times on average does the cover go back for changes?

More often than not. Hopefully a client will at least choose a general direction from the first round, and then tweak and modify from there. There are times, however, when I do have to go back to the proverbial drawing board. I don’t nickel and dime clients for each design direction or modification, but try to stay within the original budget until they’re happy.

Often we see votes for a book cover? Is it standard to create several covers for the publisher to choose from among?

Yes, publishers expect to see three to five completely different options. This can be a challenge when I feel I’ve nailed it on the first try (rare). It’s usually not the first design I’ve done that ends up being the chosen cover. There have been a few cases where a publisher will hire me along with another design firm in competition for the same project. Those are always nail biters with my fragile ego in the balance.


To see more covers, visit:
http://www.dogeareddesign.com.

Kirk DouPonce graduated with a BFA from Kendall College of Art & Design and was able to find employment shortly afterward designing for companies such as Young Life, International Bible Society, and Multnomah Publishers.


Over the years Kirk has designed thousands of book covers, won numerous awards, and has had his work featured in the Fresh section of Communication Arts Magazine. Kirk lives at 8,500 feet within the Rocky Mountains of Colorado with his wife Claudia, their sons Jackson and Eli, and their golden retrievers Rupert and Chowder.