by Robin Caroll
It’s the same for me every single time I turn
in a manuscript. I hover at my computer, checking email every 3 minutes for a
note from my editor. Doesn’t matter if it’s an editor I’ve worked with several
times or a new one. Doesn’t matter if it’s a publishing house I’ve partnered
for several books with or if it’s my first with them. I’m literally waiting
with baited breath for editorial feedback.
And when it finally comes, I have the same
sensations as I always do: excitement to see how the first person besides me
feels after interacting with my characters; dread to maybe confirmation I’m a
hack; and energized to make my book the best it can be.
Even after close to 30 books, I still manage
to go through the same emotions…and then the same steps to deal with all of
them.
Vent
When I get my edited manuscript back, I scan through it and read all the
comments quickly. Then I let myself vent. Usually to my husband.
“What does she mean this phrasing is
awkward?” and “The pacing isn’t off in this scene!” and “How can she not see
the hero’s motivation? It’s so obvious!” are all things I have vented. Just a
few of the many. And my husband, being the good man that he is, nods his head,
hugs me, then takes me out to dinner. Which also helps move into the next step…
Take a Day Away From the Manuscript
Since the family and I go out to eat, it’s easy enough not to go right back to
the file when I get back. I force myself to ignore the manuscript (and revision
notes) for 24 hours to let my subconscious work through what I read.
When I return the next day, the comments make
a lot more sense than they did the previous day. For some reason, the first
read of edits usually feel like personal attacks. After that, they feel more
like good insight and suggestions.
Remember We’re Partners to Make the Book
the Best Possible
When it’s time to start revising, it helps me to remember that my editor and I
are working together to put out the best version of my story as there can be. If
I’m unsure of her comments, I ask. I’d rather be clear on what I need to do. It's
my editor's job to tear apart my manuscript like the pickiest critic ever and
find every nitpicking detail anyone could even think about causing a pause in
the reader’s experience. It’s my job to polish until it shines. How to do that?
Here are my tips:
Complete the easy stuff first. Word choices. Active vs passive. The little things the editor pointed out that I can fix in less than a minute. Once I get those done, I always feel so productive.
Thank you for sharing your response to revisions. I'm just getting started in this business and wasn't sure if my own similar reaction to such revisions was the mark of an immature writer or a common reaction. I feel encouraged by your post and appreciate your insights on how to respond effectively, particularly the reminder that writer and editor share a common goal: to produce the best work possible. Blessings!
ReplyDeleteHeidi...it's okay to have any reaction, because everyone's different. I have one friend who LOVES revisions...another who literally cries when the email comes. It's all about finding balance and being able to work with your editor. Hope you have an amazing weekend!
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