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Showing posts with label fiction writers. Show all posts
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Wednesday, October 08, 2014

Dark and Light

by Nicole Petrino-Salter

Some of us authors specialize in darkness or light, but most of us write somewhere in between the two. The opinions of writing either way can strain the extremes of a meter to measure the positive and negative responses to each.

Some readers are flexible and will read nearly all genres without complaint as to their themes or topics. Other readers will write publishers, give one-star reviews, and post, tweet, or Facebook negativity about books they’ve selected to read, offering excuses of being “deceived” by the title, the back cover copy, or someone’s review or recommendation. Their complaints include offenses to language such as hell, crap, or boob. They say the storyline was too dark and evil and question the motives of the writer. Some will wail about “religious” inclusions even if the only thing mentioned was a prayer as someone lay dying. Still other readers will with the same intensity rave about a book offering little actual review-worthy information other than they love, love, loved the protagonist or heroine.

Some authors like to highlight the darkness to reinforce the light. Other writers like to dwell in the light and ignore the darkness. Others still want to demonstrate that nobody escapes darkness of both the external and internal variety. We are in fact sinners. We do entertain evil thoughts occasionally – or frequently. It’s not like we’ve never wanted vengeance on a wicked person or at least justice.

We do battle our flesh daily and combat the world while participating in what life encompasses. Some of us are closer to the Lord than others of us, but that is not for you or I to determine of someone else. Yes, we can identify certain faults, characteristics, and habits of others, right or wrong, and choose not to judge/condemn them.

As a reader, establish your criteria for reading fiction and stick to those authors who provide you with what you enjoy. If at any time you feel adventurous, be careful not to dive into something which is risky for your tolerance level.

Realize this: Christians might not measure up to your standards, but they must measure up to God’s. People don’t decide what that pure measurement contains because they often look in the wrong places to determine it. God judges the heart, knows the mind, and will see to the well-being of a writer who desires to honor Him with the talent given. If said author fails to do so, that remains between him and the Lord.    

Authors strive to do their best. Perhaps for the perennial bestsellers, they occasionally slide in their efforts, but as a Christian, we are told to do everything as if we’re submitting it to the Lord. That singular instruction will produce a vast array of stories because God lacks no creativity or imagination. Ideally, we authors not only want to please an audience, more than anything we want to please the Lord.

As readers, let Him be the judge of that. You don’t have to like or buy what we write, but ultimately we don’t answer to you. We answer to the One who gave us the desire and hopefully the ability to include truth in fiction. 


Nicole Petrino-Salter writes love stories with a passion. She sees reality but often lives in la-la-land. Devoted to the Lord Jesus Christ, her family, friends, and pets, you can visit her here. 





Friday, December 20, 2013

From Federal prison to inspirational author ~ William Sirls's journey


Tell us a bit about your current project.


The Sinners’ Garden is a book of forgiveness and second chances. It tells the story of Andy Kemp, a young boy whose life has been as ravaged as his scarred face. Disfigured by an abusive father, the teenager hides behind his books and an impenetrable wall of cynicism and anger.


As Andy’s mother struggles to reconnect with him, his Uncle Rip returns transformed from a stint in prison and wants to be a mentor to the reclusive boy, doing everything he can to help end Andy’s pain. When Andy begins hearing strange music through his iPod and making near-prophetic announcements, Rip is convinced that what Andy is hearing is the voice of God.


Elsewhere, police officer Heather Gerisch responds to a late-night breaking and entering in one of the poorest homes in town. She soon realizes that the masked prowler has left thousands of dollars in gift cards from a local grocery store.


As the bizarre break-ins continue and Heather pursues the elusive “Summer Santa,” Andy and Rip discover an enormous and well-kept garden of wildflowers that seems to have grown overnight at an abandoned steel mill.


Soon, they realize who the gardener is, and a spree of miracles transfigures this small town from a place of hopelessness into a place of healing and beauty.


We are all about journeys...unique ones at that. How convoluted was your path to your first published book? Share some highlights or lowlights from your path to publication.  


Whenever I think about this, I shake my head. God has been too good to me, and with His hand, I was fortunate to have missed the need to hunt for an agent or ever submit my manuscript to a traditional publisher. Still, I ended up getting signed by the biggest Christian publisher in the world.


We had originally planned on self-publishing The Reason, and a few months before the self-published version of the book was going to be released, we were pretty comfortable with the story and decided to print 100 advance copies to create a little pre-release buzz. I then contacted some of the biggest churches in the country and asked if they had any avid readers who would be interested in reading an advance copy of the book and then maybe provide me with some feedback. Once I had permission, I included a letter with each copy of the book I sent. In that letter, I basically introduced myself and provided my phone number, email address, and also mentioned I would greatly appreciate it if the reader would let me know what they thought of the story.  


I didn’t hear anything for a month or so, and I was expecting, at tops, maybe a half a dozen responses. Beyond getting any general feedback, I also wanted to identify recurring themes or concerns readers had so that I could make revisions before the final version of the book was released.


Then I received my first email from a woman out west that said she enjoyed the book and couldn’t wait for it to come out.  It was an awesome feeling. And then I received a phone call from a woman that ran a church bookstore, wanting to know how they could buy it.  Before long, we had around 250 responses from men, women, teenagers, and ministers, sharing how the book affected them in ways I couldn’t believe, and these responses were so heartwarming that they literally changed the reason I want to continue to write.


Fortunately, one of those advance copies we made ended up on the desk of a receptionist at Thomas Nelson, and it was her response to the book that resulted in it being passed on to their fiction team. Just before we were to release the self-published version of The Reason, Thomas Nelson picked up the title along with a request for me to write two additional books. Once again, God has been quite good to me, and I couldn’t be more thankful.


Do you still experience self-doubts regarding your work, or struggle in a particular area such as writers block or angst driven head-banging against walls? Please share some helpful overcoming hints that you’ve discovered.


Patience is a problem for me when I write. When I’m putting a story together, I usually write the ending first, that way I have a target to hit. But sometimes, I get so anxious to get to certain scenes, I find myself in too much of a hurry to get there. So instead of forcing the story, I’m learning to really slow down, and when I do that, the characters end up telling me what to do instead of the other way around.


What mistakes have you made while seeking publication? Or to narrow it down further what’s something you wish you’d known earlier that might have saved you some time/frustration in the publishing business?


I think I had a late start on building my social media platform. I didn’t put much of an effort into building a following on my website, Facebook, and Twitter until after The Reason was released. For budding authors, it’s extremely important to constantly blog and post on these sites in order to connect with readers and potential readers even before the release of a first book.


What is your favorite source for finding story ideas?


Altered versions of real life experiences. For me, writing offers the perfect opportunity to sprinkle personal lessons I’ve learned amongst characters in stories.


Have you ever had one of those awkward writer moments you’d like to share with us, the ones wherein you get “the look” from the normals? Example, you stand at a knife display at the sporting goods store and ask the clerk which would be the best to use to disembowel a six foot man…please do tell.
This has happened to me several times talking with readers at bookstores…


Reader at a bookstore: “Mr. Sirls, what did you do before you wrote The Reason?”


Me at bookstore:  “I was in Federal Prison.”


Look on readers face… priceless


With the clarity of experience what advice would you offer up to the wet-behind-the-ears you if beginning this writing journey today?
Always work on getting better at every aspect of the business, whether it’s the writing itself, social media, or simply reading about the ins and outs of the industry. In terms of becoming a better author, I know it’s been said a million times before, but the best advice anyone will ever give is to read a lot and write a lot. I also think it’s important to really try to have a clear vision on what the exact message is that you want to share with readers. Beyond that, have realistic goals and most importantly … have fun!


What event/person has most changed you as a writer? How?
Prison is one of those experiences I wouldn’t wish on my worst enemy, but at the same time, there are few things for which I would trade the experience, because from a spiritual standpoint, it gave me the opportunity to slow down and realize what is important. As my faith grew, I became increasingly anxious to share some of the things I learned involving faith, grace, forgiveness, and realizing that the world doesn’t revolve around William Sirls. At the same time, I didn’t want to come across as some religious jailhouse lunatic, so I figured my best way to share these lessons would be by sprinkling them amongst characters in my writing.


What piece of writing have you done that you’re particularly proud of and why? (Doesn't have to be one of your books or even published.)


The Sinners’ Garden. After all the wonderful emails, phone calls, and letters I received from readers that read The Reason, writing another story was a lot tougher than I thought it was going to be. It was extremely important to me that I didn’t let these readers down and that after they finished the book, they were both entertained and felt closer to God. Based on the reviews we’ve received so far, with God’s help, I’m thinking we may have done a decent job and I’m thankful.


Do you have a pet peeve having to do with this biz?


Not really. I think it’s a fascinating business and if I had to pick something that bothered me about it, it would be how truly unfortunate it is how many authors give up on their dreams of being published. It’s even more unfortunate how many never even try, because what’s that old saying? “If I can do it, anyone can.”


Share a dream or something you'd love to accomplish through your writing career.


I think all authors want to entertain readers, but as a Christian author with a checkered past, it’s particularly important to me that readers come away from my stories feeling closer to God. I also thought it would be pretty cool if one of my books served as some sort of icebreaker for those awkward “religious” conversations so many of us are afraid to have with people around us. I think it’s too bad that less than ten percent of Christians offer their testimony to friends and it’s equally unfortunate when we just mention “Jesus” or “the Bible,” people sometimes cringe or want to leave the room. Though there’s no substitute for the Bible, it would be an honor if a reader passed one of my books on to a friend who wasn’t a believer or even to someone who was “on the fence” in their faith. Hopefully, once that friend finished the book, it would break the ice for a spiritual conversation, giving readers an open door to talk about the Bible and how Christ can make a difference in someone’s life.


What gives you the greatest writer buzz, makes the trip worth the hassles (besides coffee or other substances, or course)?
Creating believable characters with real problems and then offering Christian solutions to those problems, and then receiving letters or emails from readers on how they related to one of these characters and how the book helped re-ignite their faith. Getting messages from readers is truly amazing!


What is one of the more unique or strange life experiences that has really given you an extra oomph in your writing?


It would have to be getting picked up by Thomas Nelson without ever having an agent or ever formally submitting a manuscript.  You should see the looks on some faces when I tell that story at writer’s groups. Once again, God has been too good to me.


Describe your special or favorite writing spot or send a picture if you'd like.


Desktop, legal pads, pens, thesaurus, Chicago Manual of style, LOTS of coffee, and the usual army of desk clutter that never seems to leave.


What aspect of writing was the most difficult for you to grasp/conquer? How did you overcome it?


Showing instead of telling.  I had/have a bad habit of bombarding single pages with tons of backstory instead of letting this information leak throughout the story. The first few drafts of The Reason also had a lot of “head-hopping” as well. This is where the writer commits the big no-no of being in more than one character’s point of view in a single scene. I speak with a lot of new writers and just like I was, so many are clueless about “showing instead of telling” and POV which if not handled properly, are manuscript death.


What is the first thing you do when you begin a new book?


Write the ending.  It’s a lot easier to then go back and let things happen with a clear target in view.  When you hit a rough spot, your characters will also know the ending and they’ll help write the book for you.


Writing rituals. Do you have to sit somewhere specific, complete a certain number of words, leave something undone to trigger creativity for the next session? Some other quirk you’d like to share?


Even if it’s gibberish, and I can’t get in the groove, there has to be 2,000 words a day, because 2,000 poorly written words that keep the story moving are better than no words at all.


Plot, seat of pants or combination?


Definite combination.  And then when these combinations don’t work, the wonderful editors I’m blessed to work with bail me out.


What is the most difficult part of pulling together a book? Ex. Do you have saggy middles, soggy characters, soupy plots during your first drafts…if so, how do you shape it up?


The ending. Once you have that in sight, you then have to negotiate the other most difficult part: the beginning. For those that don’t start with the ending, just get those first few words down, even if they aren’t exactly what you want to say, because it’s like popping open a can, and once it’s open and you get those first words out, the rest of the words aren’t right far behind.


Have you received a particularly memorable reader response or peer honor? Please share.


Childhood leukemia is a theme in The Reason and one of the reader group questions is “How could God make something good come from the death of a child?”  I encountered a young couple that had lost a son to leukemia that had also read the book and they answered that question. They told me that after their loss, their faith drew more people to God. The mother then told me that whether their son was 4, 10, 20, or 100 years old when he died, it didn’t really matter, because 1,000 years from now we will all be in heaven and that their son’s death created more believers. I was speechless.


Have you discovered any successful marketing/promo ideas that you'd share with us?


Giveaways and unscheduled visits to bookstores.  I have given a lot of books away through giveaways and to bookstore employees. If you think your book is worth reading, give it to people. If they like it, maybe they’ll tell friends or customers about it.


Parting words? Anything you wish we would’ve asked because you’ve got the perfect answer?


What was your inspiration for The Reason?


I was inspired to write The Reason in early 2004, which on the surface was a pretty difficult time in my life. I had just gone through a divorce and was in the middle of activities that were hurting a lot of good people. Those activities would ultimately lead me to federal prison.  


I clearly remember walking down a hallway at a hospital in Detroit. I was there to visit my oldest daughter who had just been diagnosed with type 1 diabetes. At the time, I guess it would be safe to say I was pretty much drowning in my own pity party when I came across a young couple, probably in their late twenties, pulling their son in a little red wagon. The boy was probably around three years old, hairless, frail, and he had a gray and ashen look that suggested the end was probably near. For me, it was one of those rare moments in life when you realize that your problems aren’t as bad as you think, and while I was trying to fathom the amount of stress this family was under, this little boy looked up and smiled at his parents and they smiled back. It was one of the most beautiful exchanges I had ever seen, and something inside of me wanted to find a way to make those smiles last, because in so many cases, particularly in cases like that, they don’t.


So over the next couple of years, as I continued to head down the wrong road in life, and continued to hurt everyone around me, I somehow, in the middle of all that destruction, wrote a manuscript about a “magical” character who appears at a small Michigan hospital that has the ability to make smiles last.  


At the end of 2007, I entered federal prison and when Christ entered my life, I decided to rewrite The Reason.  There is no such thing as a coincidence and it certainly wasn’t an accident that the story became a lot less “magical” and a lot more “spiritual.” God certainly is good, isn’t He?

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Over the course of his life, William Sirls has experienced both great highs and tremendous lows—some born of chance, some born of choice. Once a senior vice president at a major investment firm, he was incarcerated in 2007 for wire fraud and money laundering, where he learned a great deal more than he ever bargained for. Life lessons involving faith, grace, and forgiveness are evident in his writing. His first novel, The Reason, was published in 2012. The Sinners’ Garden (available December 2013) is his second novel. He is the father of two and makes his home in southern Michigan.


Learn more about William Sirls and The Sinners’ Garden at www.williamsirls.com, Facebook, or Twitter.  


Wednesday, August 22, 2012

Who Likes Bad Reviews???


Heart, home and faith have always been important to Lisa Jordan, so writing stories that feature those comes naturally to her. She has been writing contemporary Christian romance for more than a decade. Her debut novel, Lakeside Reunion, released in November by Love Inspired. Her second novel, Lakeside Family, releases this month. Happily married for over twenty years, Lisa and her husband have two young adult sons. When she isn’t writing or caring for children in her in-home childcare business, Lisa enjoys family time, romantic comedies, good books, crafting with friends and feeding her NCIS addiction. Visit her at www.lisajordanbooks.com to learn more about her writing.

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Bad Reviews Can Help You to Become a Better Writer

One star.

Wow.

I read the reviewer’s words that expressed her displeasure after reading Lakeside Family. My breath caught in my throat as my heart thumped against my ribs. Heat crawled across my cheekbones. How could she write such things? Didn’t she realize the struggle and tears that went into this story?

Of course she didn’t. She read the words on the page and wrote a well thought out review citing examples from the novel to prove her points. Despite the one star, I appreciated her feedback.

After I pondered her words a while, I considered how I could learn from it to create more likeable characters from the beginning. But, I also had to consider this character’s journey throughout the story. She carried a heavy load and needed to go through her own emotional journey to hear truth so she could learn to trust.

Authors risk public feedback the moment their books are made available to the public. Of course we want our readers to love our stories and our characters. But you know what? We won’t be able to please everyone. We simply need to write our novels to the best of our abilities and know we are offering our finest work. As authors learn more in the craft, they write better books.  

When we do get those tough reviews, we need to consider the source. Is the reviewer someone who reads a lot of books, reads a variety of genres and expresses her opinion clearly? Reviewers who like a book, but give it a lower score based on genre frustrate me. Reading the back cover copy gives the reader a general idea if the novel is Christian or secular.  

After reading the reviews, ask yourself if there’s some teachable moment threaded in the reviewer’s words. Is more than one reviewer saying something similar? Talk these concerns over with your agent and editor. Is this a weak area in your writing? Should you strive to change that particular component?

Finally, believe in yourself and your abilities. You can’t allow every review to shake your confidence. Otherwise you will be too paralyzed to write something new. When your novels are released, simply remember you did your best, your editor loved the story to have offered a contract and you won’t able to please everyone.

Bio: Married 23 years to her real life hero, Lisa Jordan knows a thing or two about romance. She and her husband have two college-aged sons and will be facing an empty nest soon. By day, Lisa is an early childhood educator, and by night, she is a contemporary romance novelist with Love Inspired. Lakeside Reunion, her debut novel, is a 2012 Carol Award Finalist. Lakeside Family, her second novel, releases in August 2012. She is represented by Rachelle Gardner of Books & Such Agency. In her free time (ha!), Lisa enjoys good books, chick flicks, crafting with friends and feeding her NCIS addiction. To learn more about Lisa, visit her website at www.lisajordanbooks.com.

Lisa is celebrating the release of Lakeside Family with a month-long party of giveaways, including Coffee Lovers and Tea Lovers baskets. For more details and to enter the gift basket giveaways, leave a comment on: http://lisajordanbooks.com/novels/lakeside-family-book-release-celebration/)


Lakeside Family
The one man she never wanted to see again is the only who can save her daughter’s life.

In the space of a minute, Nick Brennan learns he has a nine-year-old daughter— and that she desperately needs his help. All this time, his high school sweetheart, single mother Josie Peretti, thought he knew about their child. And that he just didn’t care. About the ill little girl—or Josie, the woman he’s never forgotten. But Nick made a long-ago promise never to forsake his family the way his father did. A promise he vows to make good on now… if only Josie will bless him with a second chance.



Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Branding, by Sandra D. Bricker & Book Giveaway!


For more than a decade, Sandra D. Bricker lived in Los Angeles. While honing her chosen craft of screenwriting in every spare moment, she worked as a personal assistant and publicist to some of daytime television's hottest stars. When her mom became ill in Florida, Sandie left L.A. and screenwriting behind. With 15 books now in print and 5 more slated for publication through 2013, Sandie has carved out a niche for herself as a best-selling and award-winning author of laugh-out-loud romantic comedy for the inspirational market.

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The topic of BRANDING has been a hot-button issue among writers lately, and I recently assembled a group of industry professionals to discuss it for a blog I wanted to put together. Before my writing days, I was a publicist for actors, and I had to deal with the issue of typecasting on a pretty regular basis.

But around the time that Always the Baker Never the Bride was released by Abingdon Press, branding entered my radar for the first time as an author. My dream of writing suspense was shoved to the sideline by a successful string of romantic comedies from Summerside and Abingdon Press.

During my chats on the subject, author Jenny B. Jones commented that one of the down sides of branding, for her, has been that readers aren’t totally aware that she writes anything EXCEPT YA, even though she clearly does. “I've seen bloggers mention one of my women's rom-coms and call it a YA,” she explained.

Agent Tamela Hancock Murray believes that, once an author becomes established, readers look for certain types of books from that author and could be disappointed when they find they’ve bought something else entirely. She uses music as the comparison. “If you are a fan of a dance music group, wouldn't you be disappointed by a recording featuring nothing but ballads?

No matter how good the ballads are, they are still slow grooves and not the upbeat tunes you were expecting. In my view, giving readers what they expect from you, but still keeping stories fresh, is the best path.”

Jeane and Tyson Wynn, longtime publicists for the Christian market, chimed in with their perspective. “It’s a waste of effort and lost opportunity,” Jeane says, “if authors don’t use the cheap and, in most cases, free tools available to them to reinforce their brand.” Through modern tools such as social media, she expounds, authors can “regularly engage their fans, which constantly goes to establishing their brand.”

Barbara Cameron, an author known in recent months for top-of-the-line Amish fiction, hopes that – branding aside – she has established herself as “a good writer, not just a good Amish writer.” And I’ve had the same hopes, especially in the beginning of my career when I had my eye on writing suspense rather than romantic comedy.

However, once the Another Emma Rae Creation series took off, I’ve found that my readers pick up my books with the specific expectation of a healthy dose of humor. The thought of letting them down is what inspired my quest for professional insights on the topic of branding.

One of the things I’ve learned is that branding is a bit of a familiarization technique for an author to effectively “make friends” with readers. Jeane Wynn cites the example of tag lines, such as mine: Author of Laugh-Out-Loud Fiction for the Inspirational Market.

“Brandilyn Collins is known by her Seatbelt Suspense,” Jeane explains, “and Terri Blackstock writes Up All Night fiction, so even though they both write suspense, the branding really enables both of those suspense authors to carry their own identity.” So fans of previous books provide a built-in market for new books, and there are always opportunities to try to expand within your brand.

With all the talk of platform these days,” Jeane’s husband and business partner, Tyson Wynn, adds, “it’s always a plus to take an existing potential market to a publisher when hoping they’ll publish your book. Branding can help to build that platform, which certainly is no guarantee of a publishing success, but it can help decision-makers as they decide whose book they want to take a chance on.”

As I’ve to make a definitive decision on the impact of branding on my future directions as a writer, I can’t help remembering an actor I used to know in Los Angeles. He left the steady paycheck and sort of stratosphere kind of notoriety of the soap opera he was on, and ended up coming back a year or two later.

When I asked him about it, he said that no one wanted to see him for anything other than that character he’d made famous. Meg Ryan had the same challenge when she branched out of the cute little romantic comedy heroines she made famous.

So for any writer considering their next move, I do caution you to think about branding as you look into the bigger, more far-reaching picture of your ultimate career path. A little analysis now can go a long way in building a writing career on solid ground rather than hindsight-seeking, shifting sand.


 Always the Designer, Never the Bride

How many dresses can a designer design before she finally designs her own?

Audrey Regan spent years establishing herself as a wedding dress designer and to date, she's been roped into creating dresses for nine of her girlfriends. Request #10 follows her vow to "Just say no!" and comes from her very best friend. She can hardly turn Carly down!

Audrey arrives in Atlanta to perform all of her maid-of-honor duties and the festivities make her question whether there's a prince of her own anywhere in her future. Enter the groom's brother and best man. J.R. Hunt couldn't be any more different from Prince Charming is he rode in on a Harley Davidson. Oh, wait. He actually did ride in on a Harley!